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The given tablo below illustrates information about various indexes which are social and economic for four different countries

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The given tablo below illustrates information about various indexes which are social and economic for four different countries which are Canada, Kapan, Peru and Zaire in 1994 according to the result of statistics conducted by United Nations. Overall, when we look at at the table, it can be seen that Canada and Japan have the highest values in the given table, while Zaire has the lowest valuation. Initiall, getting back to the in detail, we can see that Japon has the highest per in the annual budget per person, which was 15. 760 per. In the same category, the lowest rate is in Zaire at 130 per. Other category which daily calorie offer per person, has the most important number is Canada with 3326, while Zaire has the lowest number in the same category. Following this, there is a similar value, which was 99 percent in the adult litercy category.
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below illustrates information about various indexes which are social and economic for four
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countries which are Canada,
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Kapan
, Peru and Zaire in 1994 according to the result of statistics conducted by United Nations.

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, when we look
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at at
the table, it can be
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that Canada and Japan have the highest values in the
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table, while Zaire has the lowest valuation.

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, getting back to the in detail, we can
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that
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Japon
has the highest per in the annual budget per person, which was 15. 760 per. In the same
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, the lowest rate is in Zaire at 130 per. Other
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category
which daily calorie offer per person, has the most
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important
number is Canada with 3326, while Zaire has the lowest number in the same
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. Following this, there is a similar value, which was 99 percent in the adult
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IELTS academic The given tablo below illustrates information about various indexes which are social and economic for four different countries

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150 words
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