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The line graph compares the percentage of various four materials which were recycled in specific nation in between 1980 to 2010Overall, it can be clearly seen that the highest proportion of paper and cardboard was recycled as compare to other materials, however a decreasing trend was experienced in it after 1994.

The line graph compares the percentage of various four materials which were recycled in specific nation in between 1980 to 2010Overall, it can be clearly seen that the highest proportion of paper and cardboard was recycled as compare to other materials, however a decreasing trend was experienced in it after 1994. Plastic recycling was the least over the entire time periodTo begin with, about 65% of paper and cardboard was recycled in 1982, after that it showed some fluctuations before reaching peak. 80% in 1994, where as it started at the crease and reach 2007 with the figure 70%. From 9082 to 1989, glass containers were used with figure 50% and 40%, respectively while this trend was increased in upcoming years, Probing further, the recycling of aluminium cans was started in 1982 with Niklegi will ratio 3%, similarly the plastic recycling was started in 9087 with the figure 1%. Between 1984 and 2007, the recycling of a minimum cash and was increased, but in case of plastic it was experienced it showed constant trend with 9% ratio in 2007.

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