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The given charts below show the distribution of world's water and uses of water

The given charts below show the distribution of world's water and uses of water q3Aa

The report is being written about the information of the distribution of world's water and the use of water in three different countries namely, Egypt, Saudi Arab and Canada. Overall, In the first pie chart the picture of course to saltwater other remain fresh water moreover, in 2nd pie chart it is Apparent that the freshwater water contain by ice and glacial maximum and minimum from ground however the table charge show the use of water mostly in agriculture by two countries and other one country use for industry. The percentage of salt water was excessively fire 97% and the proportion of freshwater negligible mearly 3% while, the freshwater 79% obtained by ice and glaciers which was approximately two time above then groundwater other remains surface water contribute only 1%. The use of water for for agricultural by Egypt 80% which is significantly higher than domestic and industries are only the 10% and 5% respectively as well as, in Saudi Arab the same proportion of the use of water moreover, the canadian people use water considerably for industry almost 80% and for agriculture and domestic they use 10% only.

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