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The line graph compares the amount of acid rain produced from four different sectors of UK from 1990 to 2007.

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The line graph compares the amount of acid rain produced from four different sectors of UK from 1990 to 2007. Overall, electricity, gas and water supply was the sector which the figure of acid rain emissions declined most rapidly over the period shown. Domestic sector emitted the lowest amount of acid rain each year. In 1990, electricity, gas and water supply `s acid rain emission were at the highest amount in comparison to other sectors at about 3. 3 million tones. As opposed to electricity, gas and water supply area, transport, communication and domestic areas produced a small amount of acid rain at under 0. 7 million tones. Other industries stood in average amount at around 2. 1 million tones. Between 1990 and 2007, the figure for electricity, gas and water supply drop sharply to nearly 0. 5 million tones. In the same period, other industries and domestic sectors’ acid rain emission declined gradually to 1. 25 and 1. 2 million tons respectively. By contrast, the amount of acid rain producing by transport and communication area fluctuated between 0. 5 and 1 million tons at the rest of the period.
The line graph compares the
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In 1990,
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area, transport, communication and domestic areas produced a
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producing by transport and communication area fluctuated between 0. 5 and 1
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IELTS academic The line graph compares the amount of acid rain produced from four different sectors of UK from 1990 to 2007.

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