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The line graph belows shows the amount of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002

The line graph belows shows the amount of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002 LxWR
The graph give information about commodity transported in UK from 1974-2002. (million) The graph presented in terms break down the five categories, road, water, rail and pipeline. Overall, the amount of goods transported by road grow the most while nearly 40 million transported by water and rail in 1978. Furthermore, The other two categories keep rise in the next few year but the pipeline drawback the growth and keep steady around 1994 to 2002. In terms of road transportation, there is a rapid growth about 1994 to 2002. (Respectively nearly 65 million to 75 million). The transportation by water (nearly 60 million)was higher than rail (appropriately 40 million) On the other hand, due to the fact that the increase growth between year around 1994-2002. The water and rail transportation are met at the same point at the year 1978. (Respectively 40 million) The pipeline category was the final category and the growth for this transportation are under 20 million until 1994, There was a slightly growth after 1994, then it’s keep steady about 22 million at 2002.
The graph give information about commodity transported in UK from 1974-2002.
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(million)
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categories
, road,
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water
,
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rail
and pipeline.

Overall
, the amount of
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goods
transported by road grow the most while
nearly
40
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million
transported by
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water
and
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rail
in 1978.
Furthermore
, The other two
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categories
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keep
rise in the
next
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few year
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but
the pipeline drawback the
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growth
and
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keep
steady around 1994 to 2002.

In terms of road
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transportation
, there is a rapid
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growth
about 1994 to 2002. (
Respectively
nearly
65
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million
to 75
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million)
. The
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transportation
by
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water
(
nearly
60 million)was higher than
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rail
(
appropriately
40
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million)
On the other hand
, due to the fact that the increase
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growth
between year around 1994-2002. The
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water
and
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rail
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transportation
are met
at the same point at the year 1978. (
Respectively
40 million)

The pipeline
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category
was the final
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category
and the
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growth
for this
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transportation
are under 20
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million
until 1994, There was a
slightly
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growth
after 1994, then it’s
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keep
steady about 22
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million
at 2002.
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IELTS academic The line graph belows shows the amount of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002

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6.0
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