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The given chart illustrates contribution of the goods of Indian’s GDP in the period of time 1960 and 2000 In general, it can be seen the sector of the agriculture started very well, while in the next decades it appears decreased rapidly.

The given chart illustrates contribution of the goods of Indian’s GDP in the period of time 1960 and 2000 In general, it can be seen the sector of the agriculture started very well, while in the next decades it appears decreased rapidly. w9Wr
The given chart illustrates contribution of the goods of Indian’s GDP in the period of time 1960 and 2000 In general, it can be seen the sector of the agriculture started very well, while in the next decades it appears decreased rapidly. On the other hand, the services area wasn’t good from the very beginning, however it’s changed dramatically and the other area industry that increased in a static way. At the very beginning, in 1960 the agriculture area was leading the top position and the ratio looks like around 62, although in the next decades like 1970 to 2000 it decreased substantially. Where the services industry showed different statistics. In 1960 the services area percentage around little over 10, but in 1970 to 2000 it increased is a rapid way. In the final, the industry area nothing much changed in 1970 it’s changed approximately 15 to 20, though in 1980 to 2000 it’s static in a same position. So that the industry area was increased gradually.
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of Indian’s GDP in the period of time 1960 and 2000

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the sector of the agriculture
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started
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well, while in the
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services
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wasn’t
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good
from the
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beginning,
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dramatically
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industry
that increased
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At the
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beginning, in 1960 the agriculture
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was leading the top position and the ratio looks like around 62, although in the
next
decades like 1970 to 2000 it decreased
substantially
.
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services
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industry
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different
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area
percentage around
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over 10,
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in 1970 to 2000 it increased is a rapid way.

In the final, the
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industry
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nothing much
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changed
in 1970 it’s
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changed
approximately 15 to 20, though in 1980 to 2000 it’s static in a same position.
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industry
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was increased
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IELTS academic The given chart illustrates contribution of the goods of Indian’s GDP in the period of time 1960 and 2000 In general, it can be seen the sector of the agriculture started very well, while in the next decades it appears decreased rapidly.

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