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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years. kVw2
The pia chart gives information about occupation status of Anthropoly graduates from one educational system after concluding their undergraduate degree course, and the table shows how much salary was paid for these three types of employments after five years. Overall, it can be clear that the proportion of people who worked full-time was the highest and took half of the table, while opposite site of them accounted for part-time and postgraduated workers. The rates of anthropologists working in private companies got the great amount of salary, whereas who worked as freelance consultants and in a government sector were true to the lowest salary, exactly the same. In terms of employment status of completed undergraduated degree course, the immense number of Anthropoly graduates worked whole day, at 52 percent, while people who had part-time job and the unempoyed were considerably lower, at 15% and 12%respectively. Other remained workers did not rise from 8%: Anthropoly graduates choosing full-time postgraduate study and the unknown group were the same, at 8%, whereas the least(5%) percentage of Anthropoly graduates worked part- time as well as keeping up their postgraduate study at the time. According to table, the salary of freelance consultants and Anthropoly graduates who worked in government sectors had 5% between 25, 000and 49, 999$ after five years while private companies workers reached one time higher than them, at 10%. By contrast, the great rates of salary of those working both in government sectors and in private companies, and worked as freelance consultants accounted for 50 %, 30 % and 40% respespectively in 100, 00$ and more.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years.

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