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The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. R7lk
The line graph illustrates the variations in amount of fast food (pizza, hamburger, and fish and chips) intake by teenagers in Australia between 1975 and 2000, a period of 25 years. Overall, fish and chips was best choice among the teenagers in the begining year, while pizza and hamburger became popular in the later years. The fish and chips experienced the downward trend whereas the consumption of both the other category steadily increased for the given timeframe. In 1975, pizza and hamburgers were eaten approximately 5 times per year by the adolescents, but the figure rose dramatically in later years. With regards to pizza consumption, the number increased gradually exceeding fisha and chips in 1990 and reach to its peak of about 85 times per year in 1995. Then, it remained constant till the final year. Similarly, hamburgers consumption sharply increased to 85 times in 1985 and thenafter, the consumption showed a gradual increase reaching to highest of 100 times making it most famous amongst the teenager in the final year when compared with other food category. On the other hand, fish and chips was consumed 100 times per year making it most popular in 1975, This number continuously decreased with slight fluctuation in between hitting to the lowest of less than 40 times consumption per year in 2000.
The line graph illustrates the variations in amount of
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fast
food (pizza, hamburger, and fish and chips) intake by
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teenagers
in Australia between 1975 and 2000, a period of 25 years.

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, fish and chips
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was best
choice among the
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teenagers
in the
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begining
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year
, while pizza and hamburger became popular in the later years. The fish and chips experienced the downward trend whereas the
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consumption
of both the other category
steadily
increased for the
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given
timeframe.

In 1975, pizza and hamburgers
were eaten
approximately 5
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times
per
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year
by the adolescents,
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but
the figure rose
dramatically
in later years.
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
With regards to
pizza
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consumption
, the number increased
gradually
exceeding
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fisha
and chips in 1990 and reach to its peak of about 85
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times
per
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year
in 1995. Then, it remained constant till the final
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year
.
Similarly
, hamburgers
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consumption
sharply
increased to 85
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times
in 1985 and
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thenafter
, the
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consumption
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showed
a gradual increase reaching to highest of 100
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times
making it most
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famous
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amongst
the
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teenager
in the final
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year
when compared with other food category.

On the other hand
, fish and chips
was consumed
100
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times
per
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year
making it most popular in 1975, This number
continuously
decreased with slight fluctuation in between hitting to the lowest of less than 40
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times
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consumption
per
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year
in 2000.
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IELTS academic The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

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