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The diagram shows rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.

The diagram shows rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town. g3O7

The diagram illustrates how an Australian town collects rainwater in order to use for daily consumption. Overall, there are five stages in the whole rainwater gathering process with the collection of impured water, then being filtered, and ending with the distribution of purified water to the homes. Initially, the rain that falls on the rooftop is collected from the gutter, and then it runs down the pipe to the drain at the bottom. At the next stage, before being stored in a tank, the rainwater is made to pass along the drains to a water filter to get rid of any impurities. In order to make it fit for consumption, the water flows from the storage tank to the water treatment. At this point, chemicals are added to the water. When it is treated and made ready for drinking, the pipelines lead it back to the houses where it can be supplied for domestic use.

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use
 for daily consumption.

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, then being filtered
, and ending with the distribution of purified You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
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 to the homes.

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, the rain that falls on the rooftop is collected
 from the gutter, and then it runs down the pipe to the drain at the bottom. At the next
 stage, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being stored
 in a tank, the rainwater is made
 to pass along the drains to a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
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get
 rid of any impurities.

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make
 it fit for consumption, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 flows from the storage tank to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 treatment. At this point, chemicals are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
. When it is treated
 and made ready for drinking, the pipelines lead it back to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
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use
. 