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The line graph belows percentage of peoples in three countries

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The line graph compares survey of percentage of individuals in five dissimilar countries. It is clear that, at the begnning of the time, the individuals' performans were the lowest which was the USA in 1990. in addition that, some of them coutries which were Canadia and UK had many individuals' performance in period of that time. it is comprehand, that countries' population were had maked headway from 1990 to 2000. due to this, it is clear to say, that first line which was appropriate to Canadia was swiftly developed between in 2000 and 2015. Notwithstanding, Another countries were diclined in that period of time.
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