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Bar chart number of trips in one country in 1990 and 2010

Bar chart number of trips in one country in 1990 and 2010 Q8kex

The bar Chart illustrated the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different transportations facillities. Comparing this situation throughout the both years, its can be seen, overall that children of the past century were mostly walking while going to and coming back from school, while in the 21frst Century, children were about 12 millions as car passengers. In detail, Cycling for example is not part of the transportation modes for pupils in 2010, althought it is the second preferable ways to go to school in 1990, Because after walking, which is over 12 millions trips per years, cycling comes next with slightly more than 6 millions. However children in 2010 were mostly using modern transportations, its might be due to the fact that Industrialisation has been booming, comparing to kids of the 20th century where things were more difficult.

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