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The line graph below shows the sales of children’s books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country.

The line graph gives information on the sales of juvenile’s books, matured novels and educational books from 2002 to 2006 in a single nation. Units are measured in dollars. Overall, it is noticeable that, while educational and children’s books sales went up, adult fictions declined. Moreover, the sales of children’s book increased higher than any other book through the period. With regard to children’s book sales, the amount at the beginning of the period stood at around 35 million dollars andmovedup to merely above 40 million dollars in 2003. The sales grew at a slow pace from 2003 to 2005 and soared to approximately 58 million dollars at the end of the period. There were fluctuations in educational books sales after the sale in the beginning of the era (almost 26 million dollars). On the other hand, the sales of adult novels started extremely high, around 48 million dollars from the start of the period which declined to just below 40 million dollars in the 2003. The sales went up slightly in the following year and deceased substantially in the subsequent years till the end of the period (30 million dollars).

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