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the flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation.

The structural outline orients regarding the adverse effects of deforestation. To begin with, to cut-down forests heavy machinery bring up to forests and they compresses the soil because of their heavy weight. As a result, soil becomes hard and baked. As a consequence, the water of rain runs off from the soil and creating a situation of flooding. After that, as cutting down trees, there are decrease in the number of roots which holds the top soil and because of that, top soil erodes and unwanted pioneer species move in and harm the vegetation. This lead to a less biodiversity. Moreover, there is increased in risk of burning of forest which caused by accidentally or deliberately. The waste wood of logging process is destroyed and microorganism could not find their food and they get into the farms for food. They just hard crops and other plants. The final consequence of deforestation is that less plants is directly proportional to less moisture to air and less precipitation. As a result, it creates increased in drought and that lead to less biodiversity. Overall, it can be say that, there are three major negative effects of deforestation such as flooding, soil erosion, and less biodiversity.
The structural outline orients regarding the adverse effects of deforestation.

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cut
-down forests heavy machinery bring up to
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forests and
they
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compresses
the
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soil
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because
of their heavy weight.
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,
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soil
becomes
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hard
and baked. As a consequence, the water of rain runs off from the
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soil
and creating a situation of flooding.

After that, as cutting down trees, there are decrease in the number of roots which holds the top
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soil
and
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because
of that, top
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soil
erodes and unwanted pioneer species
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move
in and harm the vegetation. This lead to a
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less
biodiversity.

Moreover
, there
is increased
in
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risk
of burning of forest which caused by
accidentally
or
deliberately
. The waste wood of logging process is
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destroyed
and microorganism could not find their
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food and
they
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get
into the farms for food. They
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just
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hard
crops and other plants.

The final consequence of deforestation is that
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less
plants is
directly
proportional to
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moisture to air and
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precipitation.
As a result
, it creates increased in drought and that lead to
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less
biodiversity.

Overall
, it can be say that, there are three major
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negative
effects of deforestation such as flooding,
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soil
erosion, and
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less
biodiversity.
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