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The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the average temperature each month among three major cities which are London, New York, and Sydney. Also the table tells us the total sunshine annual hours of the three cities. Overall, the London and New York had a similar trend as cold winter and hot summer, whereas Sydney had a opposite trend compared London and New York which it had cool climate in summer and hot climate in winter. Regardless the greatest hours of sunshine was the New York and Sydney had hours slightly lower than New Yorks figure, then London had the less hours which less than a half of New York's figure. Looking more closely at the graph, New York's New Year was started as coldest as little less than 5'F, and London was approximately 7'F. However Sydney was slightly higher than 25'F in July, New York reached a peak as 30'F and Sydney was only about 15'F in December. Sydney went back to lower than 10'F. For a year, the most city had the sun was New York which had 2, 535 hours on sunshine. London had only 1, 180 hours a year so New York city had more than 2 times what Londons' annual sunshine hours.
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annual
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, the London and
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York had a similar trend as
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winter and hot summer, whereas Sydney had
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opposite trend compared London and
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York which it had cool climate in summer and hot climate in winter. Regardless the greatest
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was the
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less than 5'F, and London was approximately 7'F.
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about 15'F in December. Sydney went back to lower than 10'F. For a year, the most city had the sun was
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. London had
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IELTS academic The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

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