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tHE DIAGRAM ILLUSTRTAES HOW STEEL RODS ARE MANUFACTURED IN THE FURNITURE INDUSTRY . sUMMARIZE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHEN CONVINIENT

The diagram depicts information about steel rods production in the furniture industry. Overall, it is clear that the method of manufacturing consists of eleven stages, beginning with the collection of raw materials and ending up with the inspection. Firstly, the raw materials, which are iron ore, yellow ore, or carbon, are gathered and handed over to the processing area. Collected materials are then melted through a slit, heated to a temperature of 1300 to 1500 degrees Celsius. Next, this is transferred to a smelting cabin to undergo refinement before it is placed in a pouring machine to produce candescent metal and poured into ingots. In the subsequent stage, ingots are then connected to a cooling reservoir at a temperature of 60 to 100 degrees Celsius. The next step is the strand casting in which metal goes through nozzles and the strands of cooled metal are made. Following this, metal passed through rollers and a machine for the heat treatment. The surface is then checked through a measuring automaton and a cutter is used in a sizing process. Finally, steel rods are stamped and ready to undergo inspection

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 production in the furniture industry. Overall
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clear
 that the method of manufacturing consists of eleven stages, beginning with the collection of raw materials and ending up with the inspection.

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, the raw materials, which are iron ore, yellow ore, or carbon, are gathered
 and handed over to the processing area. Collected materials are then melted You use this word too often, consider replacing it withover
through
 a slit, heated to a temperature of 1300 to 1500 degrees Celsius. Next
, this is transferred
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before
 it is placed
 in a pouring machine to produce Possible spelling mistake found.can descent
candescent
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metal
 and poured into ingots.

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 step is the strand casting in which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalloyoreingothardwaremineral
metal
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. Following this, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalloyoreingothardwaremineral
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through
 rollers and a machine for the heat treatment. The surface is then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
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through
 a measuring automaton and a cutter is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in a sizing process. Finally
, steel rods are stamped
 and ready to undergo inspection