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The line graph below shows the population figure in India and China in 2000and 2050

The line graph below shows the population figure in India and China in 2000and 2050 mb8nO
The line graph represents about population rose in India and China in the year of 2000. Predictions for population growth up until 2050. Overall, at the beginning of period population growth was the highest in China, while India was the least increase. In comparison, at the end of period predicted India's growth is more rapidly than China in the given years. In terms of people increase, more than 1200 billion of people was China over the year of 2000 and about 0. 25 billion higher than India. In India’s prolongation which was 1 billion. For the next 30 years, China’s demography reach to around 1450 billion from 1200 billion. On the other hand, the number of population in India rose rapidly from 1000 billion in 2000 to 1450 billion in 2030 and this year poll growth will equal. For the remaining outgrowth of peoples' at the end of period there will slightly drop of demography accrual from 2040 to 2050 in China. In contrast, Enhance of poll in India will dramatically the last 20 year of period, an increase 150 billion.
The line graph represents about
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rose in India and China in the
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year
of 2000. Predictions for
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population
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growth
up until 2050.

Overall
, at the beginning of
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period
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population
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growth
was the highest in China, while India was the least increase.
In comparison
, at the
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end
of
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period
predicted India's
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growth
is more
rapidly
than China in the
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years.

In terms of
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people
increase, more than 1200
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billion
of
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people
was China over the
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of 2000 and about 0. 25
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higher than India. In India’s prolongation which was 1
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billion
. For the
next
30 years, China’s demography reach to around 1450
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billion
from 1200
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billion
.
On the other hand
, the number of
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population
in India rose
rapidly
from 1000
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billion
in 2000 to 1450
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billion
in 2030 and this
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poll
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growth
will equal.

For the remaining outgrowth of peoples' at the
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of
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period
there will
slightly
drop of demography accrual from 2040 to 2050 in China.
In contrast
, Enhance of poll in India will
dramatically
the last 20
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year
of
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, an increase 150
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.

IELTS academic The line graph below shows the population figure in India and China in 2000and 2050

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