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The line graph below shows the percentage of workers in three sectors in South Korea between 1985 and 2015.

The line graph below shows the percentage of workers in three sectors in South Korea between 1985 and 2015. x8xGa

The given line graph provides data on the proportion of employees in three sectors in South Korea namely Services, Agriculture, and Industry between 1985 and 2015. Overall, over the period of sixty years, the percentage of working people in agriculture and industry decreased moderately, whereas that in services displayed an upward trend. It can be seen, in 1985, the rate of workers in industry stood at about 25%. After that, the figure increased slightly to about 35% in 1995, followed by a margin fall to 20% in 2015. The figure in agriculture sector also illustrated a similar trend. Beginning at about 35% in 1985, the proportion of employees then declined steadily to around 15% in 2010 and continued to fall slightly by 10% in the end of the period. On the contrary, a sharp rise was recorded in the percentage of workers in services. Specifically, in 1985, the quantity of staff stood at 40%, it then increased by 20% in 2010. Finally, the figure went up to 70% in 2015.

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given
 line graph provides data on the proportion of employees in three sectors in South Korea namely
 Services, Agriculture, and Industry between 1985 and 2015. Overall
, over the period of sixty years, the percentage of working This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in agriculture and industry decreased moderately
, whereas that in services displayed an upward trend.

It can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
, in 1985, the rate of workers in industry stood at about 25%. After that, the figure increased slightly
 to about 35% in 1995, followed by a margin fall to 20% in 2015. The figure in agriculture sector also
 illustrated a similar trend. Beginning at about 35% in 1985, the proportion of employees then declined steadily
 to around 15% in 2010 and continued to fall slightly
 by 10% in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period.

On the contrary
, a sharp rise was recorded
 in the percentage of workers in services. Specifically
, in 1985, the quantity of staff stood at 40%, it then increased by 20% in 2010. Finally
, the figure went up to 70% in 2015. 