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The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2030 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given pie chart shows six sectors information of worldwide production by categories in 2030 and 2050. On the whole, there is a slight change in the projected proportion of production by various sectors in the two years, and all these departments will increase except for the decline of energy and agriculture. Until the year 2050, It is forecast that the materials and info-com tech will slightly increase from 2. 9% to 3. 5% and from 5. 6% to 5. 9% from the year 2030. The services will slightly increase from 50. 2% in 2030 to 51. 2% in 2050. By contrast, the proportion of production from manufacturing is expected to rise from 30. 6% to 33. 1%. However, not all the global production sectors will grow. As for agriculture, the difference is not expected to be large, dropping by twofold from 4% to 2%. Before 2050, it is predicted that by 2030, the services industry will decline from 6. 7% to 4. 3%.
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six sectors information of worldwide
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production
by categories in 2030 and 2050.

On the whole
, there is a slight
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change
in the projected proportion of
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production
by various sectors in the two years, and all these departments will increase
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except for
the decline of energy and agriculture.

Until the year 2050, It is forecast that the materials and info-com tech will
slightly
increase from 2. 9% to 3. 5% and from 5. 6% to 5. 9% from the year 2030. The services will
slightly
increase from 50. 2% in 2030 to 51. 2% in 2050. By contrast, the proportion of
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production
from manufacturing is
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expected
to rise from 30. 6% to 33. 1%.

However
, not all the global
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production
sectors will grow. As for agriculture, the difference is not
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expected
to be large, dropping by twofold from 4% to 2%.
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Before
2050, it
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that by 2030, the
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services
industry will decline from 6. 7% to 4. 3%.
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