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The line graph below shows the number of serious crimes that occurred in London between 2003 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the number of serious crimes that occurred in London between 2003 and 2012. Kpl6

The line graph illustrates the number of criminal activities such as armed robbery, assault and murder that happened in London from 2003 to 2012. Overall, it was seen that rates of armed robbery showed an upward trend while assault crime experienced a downward trend. However, murder activity remains relatively same throughout the given time period with some fluctuation. In regards to assault crime, its figure rose from around 2200 to approximately 2700, between 2003 and 2008. It was the lowest and same in the years 2006 and 2008, which was estimated at 2000. In London, the highest violent was a robbery in the given years. In 2003, under 3500 robberies were taking place which rose to above 3500 in the next year. Then its figure gradually dipped from over 3500 to nearly above 1000 in 2004 and 2008 respectively. But in a later year (2009), it increased to nearly 7500 and levelled off with some fluctuation till the end of the years. A murder case in London was found to be lease popular amongst the other two crimes. This act was less than 1000 in all years but mostly remained at and around 500.

The line graph illustrates the number of criminal activities such as armed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfelonyheistholdupembezzlementlarcenytheft
robbery
, assault and murder that happened in London from 2003 to 2012.

Overall
, it was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that rates of armed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfelonyheistholdupembezzlementlarcenytheft
robbery
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 an upward trend while assault crime experienced a downward trend. However
, murder activity remains relatively
 same throughout the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 time period with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fluctuation.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".In regard toWith regard toRegarding
In regards to
 assault crime, its figure rose from around 2200 to approximately 2700, between 2003 and 2008. It was the lowest and same in the years 2006 and 2008, which was estimated
 at 2000.

In London, the highest violent was a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfelonyheistholdupembezzlementlarcenytheft
robbery
 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 years. In 2003, under 3500 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfelonyheistholdupembezzlementlarcenytheft
robberies
 were taking place which rose to above 3500 in the next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
. Then its figure gradually
 dipped from over 3500 to nearly
 above 1000 in 2004 and 2008 respectively
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 in a later You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 (2009), it increased to nearly
 7500 and levelled off with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fluctuation till the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the years.

A murder case in London was found
 to be lease popular amongst the other two crimes. This act was less than 1000 in all years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
mostly
 remained at and around 500. 