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The line graph below shows the monthly ridership of four separate transformation form in and European metropolitian area between 1980 and 2030

The line graph below shows the monthly ridership of four separate transformation form in and European metropolitian area between 1980 and 2030 WqPEK

The picture real representation depicts the monthly transformation separated li of four ridership forms in an European metropolitian area between 1980 and 2030. The most eye-catching feature to be noted that is, the use of Subway begins from 2. 5 Lots 24. 5 tones which is the highest one. To commence with, in green transportation usage rise from 0. 4 million and end up with 2 trillion where on the other hand, bike share and habit of bus users start at 0. 3 in 2000 1. 6 in 1980 at lots of rate. For instance, begin in 1980 is of green transportation usage the number of commters consequently, uses of Subway initial at 2. 5 million and absurd that 3. 5 lots and straight from 2010 to 2020 and after that absence from 3. 5 to 4. 5 dramatically. Furthermore the uses of bus begins at 1. 5 lots slightly drop in 2020 and stop at 2030 where the user of bikes year from 2000 rise up and increase from 0. 1 to 0. 6 million.

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