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TOPIC: Do you think phone addiction is a serious problem? Write a persuasive essay of about 250 words on the topic above do you think phone addiction is a serious problem? write an essay of about 250 words on the topic above

TOPIC: Do you think phone addiction is a serious problem? Write a persuasive essay of about 250 words on the topic above do you think phone addiction is a serious problem? write an essay of about 250 words on the topic above 7PYPk

Mobile phones enable people to communicate with people all over the world in real-time. While this invention was created to empower us, it has instead come to dominate us. Smartphone addiction is now one of the most common vital problems. Of course, smartphones are undeniably useful and have changed our lives in a variety of ways. However, it appears a pity that these addictive devices are gradually taking over our lives. It is all too easy to become reliant on our phones, whether it is to navigate around with the map app or simply to check the time. As a result, we are becoming more anti-social, preferring to consult the internet rather than converse with other humans. Even when we are out, it appears that most of us struggle without our phones within arm's reach. Phones were invented to keep us more connected, and they have succeeded in doing so. We can now communicate through an infinite number of social media platforms, but this means we are losing genuine contact with one another. People are increasingly connecting through screens rather than in person, even when it comes to dating - dating apps and websites are more popular than ever. Mobile phones allow us to communicate with people all over the world while also allowing us to watch movies, take pictures, listen to music, surf the internet, and do a variety of other things. It is difficult to avoid becoming accustomed to it. It must, however, be devoid of any prey. This is due to the possibility of negative consequences. Many serious problems result from mobile addiction, including headaches, vision loss, sleepiness, depression, social isolation, stress, aggressive behavior, financial difficulties, squandered relationships, and so on. To summarize, phone addiction is a serious problem that we must begin to solve. Although mobile phones were designed for our convenience, we should limit their use in managing our lives. If you think you are becoming addicted to your phone, look into ways to get rid of it.

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