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map comparison of museum for year year 1998 and 2008

map comparison of museum for year year 1998 and 2008 lX5dD

There are two maps displayed for a museum first of the year 1998 and second of the year 2008. The stripped lines in both maps indicate the permanent exhibition rooms. To begin with, map of the museum in 1998 had most space allocated to permanent and temporary exhibition rooms. In the center was the entrance where the tickets could be purchased followed by a garden and a cafe to the right of the entrance, there were shop, WC and bags & coats sections. On the other hand, in the year 2008 there were modifications. All the permanent exhibition rooms were shifted to the right of the museum. The shop and bags & coats section was moved on the left of entrance, fountains were added to the garden area. To summarize, it is clear that the map of 2008 had all the sections that were available in 1998 but with modifications, more space was given to some sections. Also, a restaurant area was added and café sitting area was increased.

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maps
 displayed for a museum first
 of the year 1998 and second of the year 2008. The stripped lines in both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
maps
 indicate the permanent exhibition rooms.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
map
 of the museum in 1998 had most space allocated to permanent and temporary exhibition rooms. In the center was the entrance where the tickets could be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 followed by a garden and a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 to the right of the entrance, there were shop, WC and bags & coats sections.

On the other hand
, in the year 2008 there were modifications. All the permanent exhibition rooms were shifted
 to the right of the museum. The shop and bags & coats section was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 of entrance, fountains were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the garden area.

To summarize
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
map
 of 2008 had all the sections that were available in 1998 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 with modifications, more space was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 sections. Also
, a restaurant area was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 and café sitting area was increased
. 