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The line chart depicts the changes in two-wheeler ownership over the period of 30 years from 1980 to 2010 in Singapore.

The line chart depicts the changes in two-wheeler ownership over the period of 30 years from 1980 to 2010 in Singapore. O6Dy3
The line chart depicts the changes in two-wheeler ownership over the period of 30 years from 1980 to 2010 in Singapore. In 1980, 60% of all Singapore households did not have regular use of a two-wheeler. Around 44% of households had one two-wheeler, but only about 7% had two two-wheelers. It was uncommon for families to own three or more two-wheelers, with around 2% of households falling into this category. The one two-wheeler household was the most common type from the late 1980s onwards although there was little change in the figures for this category. The biggest change was seen in the proportion of households without a two-wheeler, which fell steadily over the 30-year period to around 25% in 2010. In contrast, the proportion of two two-wheeler families rose steadily, reaching about 26% in 2010, and the proportion of households with more than two two-wheelers rose by around 5%. Overall, two-wheeler ownership in Singapore increased between the period 1980 and 2010. In particular, the number of households with two-two wheeler rose, while the number of households without a two-wheeler fell.
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ownership over the period of 30 years from 1980 to 2010 in Singapore.

In 1980, 60% of all Singapore
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households
did not have regular
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of a
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two-wheeler
.
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households
had one
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two-wheeler
,
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about 7% had two
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two-wheelers
. It was uncommon for families to
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three or more
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, with
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around
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households
falling into this category.

The one
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two-wheeler
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was the most common type from the late 1980s onwards although there was
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little
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in the figures for this category. The biggest
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without a
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, which fell
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around
25% in 2010.
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, the proportion of two
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families rose
steadily
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with more than two
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two-wheelers
rose by
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around
5%.

Overall
,
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two-wheeler
ownership in Singapore increased between the period 1980 and 2010.
In particular
, the number of
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households
with two-two wheeler rose, while the number of
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households
without a
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fell.
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IELTS academic The line chart depicts the changes in two-wheeler ownership over the period of 30 years from 1980 to 2010 in Singapore.

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