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The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.

The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. jR9qM
The line graph illustrates the regional household rates in UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015. It can be clearly seen that in 2005, the recycling rates of UK and Germany were nearly 35% and 20% respectively. Germany's rate increased sharply throughout the period, exceeding France's in the end of the period. In the meantime, the percentage of recycled waste in the UK grew to 40% in 2007 and then remained steady until 2009. During 2007 to 2011 it experienced a rapid surge to more than 50% and continued with gradual increase to 60% in 2015. In early 2005 the recycling rate of France (50%) was the highest among these three countries. However, it dramatically declined to 30% in 2013. Then, there was a growth of 10% in 2015, but France's recycling rate was the lowest in the end of the period. Overall, the recycling rates of the UK and Germany showed upward trend whilst, the percentage of recycled waste in France experienced a downward trend.
The line graph illustrates the regional household
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rates
in UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015.

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that in 2005, the
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recycling
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rates
of UK and Germany were
nearly
35% and 20%
respectively
. Germany's
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rate
increased
sharply
throughout the period, exceeding France's in the
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end
of the period. In the meantime, the percentage of recycled waste in the UK grew to 40% in 2007 and then remained steady until 2009. During 2007 to 2011 it experienced a rapid surge to more than 50% and continued with gradual increase to 60% in 2015.

In early 2005 the
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recycling
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of France (50%) was the highest among these three countries.
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dramatically
declined to 30% in 2013. Then, there was a growth of 10% in 2015,
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France's
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was the lowest in the
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end
of the period.

Overall
, the
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of the UK and Germany
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upward trend whilst, the percentage of recycled waste in France experienced a downward trend.
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IELTS academic The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.

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