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The diagram shows the relationship between a numbers of different languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the varieties of English spoken throughout the world and how they are related. There are two main branches of English: British English and American English. The British English Branch is geographically wide-spread. It extends across several continents from the West Indies, through the British Isles themselves, Africa, the Indian subcontinent, the Far East, and Australasia. In addition to the four varieties of English spoken in the British Isles (i. e. in Ireland, Wales, Scotland, and England), it includes a large number of other varieties, for instance, Jamaican English, South Africa English, and Australian English. The American branch is largely restricted to the American continent. It comprises the varieties of English spoken in the different regions of the United States itself, as well as in Canada. Beyond the continent, the extent of its influence is limited to the Philippines in the Far East and American Samoa in the Pacific. In brief, the diagram shows that, like the economic and political influence of the Anglo-Saxon countries, the reach of English has extended to virtually every region of the world.
The diagram
shows
the
varieties
of English spoken throughout the world and how they
are related
.

There are two main branches of English: British English and American English. The British English Branch is
geographically
wide-spread. It extends across several continents from the West Indies, through the British Isles themselves, Africa, the Indian subcontinent, the Far East, and Australasia.
In addition
to the four
varieties
of English spoken in the British Isles (
i. e.
in Ireland, Wales, Scotland, and England), it includes
a large number of
other
varieties
,
for instance
, Jamaican English, South Africa English, and Australian English.

The American branch is
largely
restricted to the American continent. It comprises the
varieties
of English spoken in the
different
regions of the United States itself,
as well
as in Canada. Beyond the continent, the extent of its influence
is limited
to the Philippines in the Far East and American Samoa in the Pacific.

In brief
, the diagram
shows
that, like the economic and political influence of the Anglo-Saxon countries, the reach of English has extended to
virtually
every region of the world.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the relationship between a numbers of different languages.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
180 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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