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Curretly, computer have a range of benefit in our life. Almost profession needs use the computer to increase the communication benefit and boost the working productivity, that lead to higher working efficiency. In the corona virus circumstances and online learning is inevitable, in Vietnam thanks to the wide use of computer at schools. In other words, computers not only bring personal benefits, but also benefit to the community.

Curretly, computer have a range of benefit in our life. Almost profession needs use the computer to increase the communication benefit and boost the working productivity, that lead to higher working efficiency. In the corona virus circumstances and online learning is inevitable, in Vietnam thanks to the wide use of computer at schools. In other words, computers not only bring personal benefits, but also benefit to the community. L37lG
Curretly, computer have a range of benefit in our life. Almost profession needs use the computer to increase the communication benefit and boost the working productivity, that lead to higher working efficiency. In the corona virus circumstances and online learning is inevitable, in Vietnam thanks to the wide use of computer at schools. In other words, computers not only bring personal benefits, but also benefit to the community.
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the computer to increase the communication
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and boost the working productivity, that lead to higher working efficiency. In the
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circumstances and online learning is inevitable, in Vietnam thanks to the wide
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IELTS academic Curretly, computer have a range of benefit in our life. Almost profession needs use the computer to increase the communication benefit and boost the working productivity, that lead to higher working efficiency. In the corona virus circumstances and online learning is inevitable, in Vietnam thanks to the wide use of computer at schools. In other words, computers not only bring personal benefits, but also benefit to the community.

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