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The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010

The supplied line graph illustrates the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros during a five year period from January 2006 to December 2010. It can be clearly seen that, the share price reached its peak in 2007, while by 2010, the share price had similar with a bit difference as the previous year. It is interesting to note that, the share price of Outokumpu companies began with around 13 euros in 2006 and the price fluctuated at 20 euros from this year. In 2007, the share price reached its peak with over 30 euros, while this figure decreased with a fluctuation at over 20 euros and increased gradually to 30 euros from this year. By 2008, the share price had decreased steadily to over 5 euros. On the other hand, the share price fluctuated from 2009 to 2010 with the same number as a previous year with a bit difference with around 13 euros.
The supplied line graph illustrates the
changes
in the
share
price
of
Outokumpu
companies
in euros during a five
year
period from January 2006 to December 2010. It can be
clearly
seen
that, the
share
price
reached its peak in 2007, while by 2010, the
share
price
had similar with a
bit
difference as the previous
year
. It is interesting to note that, the
share
price
of
Outokumpu
companies
began with around 13 euros in 2006 and the
price
fluctuated at 20 euros from this
year
. In 2007, the
share
price
reached its peak with over 30 euros, while this figure decreased with a fluctuation at over 20 euros and increased
gradually
to 30 euros from this
year
. By 2008, the
share
price
had decreased
steadily
to over 5 euros.
On the other hand
, the
share
price
fluctuated from 2009 to 2010 with the same number as a previous
year
with a
bit
difference with around 13 euros.
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IELTS academic The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010

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