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The diagram below shows the percentage of share of total world production of wheat by Asia Europe and other part of the world from the years 1840 to 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of total world productionAsia,Eaerople an he propor tion on to ta l world prduct2 100f 1840,the wheat proanadtione restit tha worlop erame a for almost 909.1 of thcewonhae woheat prodauc ti n ia sin Anae nope accaunted for athas t half,reaching at52%Subseguently,its figure dropped dramatically toonefifthin 1920,reaching its lowest point andstabilrsinge at this level for 40 years,before it doubled to 40%in2000.On the other hand,the share of Wheat production in Europe increased steadily from about3.8%in 1840 to 48%in 1920,after which itfell and bottomed out at approximately 25%in2000 In terms of the rest of the world,the wheat yield saw a significant escalation from nearly 9% to two out of five between 18.40 and 1960, before it,on the contrary,declined by roughly5%, Overall,the overall wheat output in other countries showed an upward tendency,whereas Asia and Europe experienced an oppositetrend during the whole period,which contributed to much smallergaps among the three in.2000,although Asia still led the way
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of total world productionAsia,Eaerople an he propor tion on to ta l world prduct2

100f 1840,the wheat proanadtione restit tha worlop erame a for almost

909.1 of thcewonhae woheat prodauc ti n ia sin Anae nope accaunted for athas t

half,reaching at52%Subseguently,its figure dropped dramatically toonefifthin 1920,reaching its lowest point andstabilrsinge at this level for 40

years,before it doubled to 40%in2000.On the other hand,the share of

Wheat production in Europe increased steadily from about3.8%in 1840

to 48%in 1920,after which itfell and bottomed out at approximately

25%in2000

In terms of the rest of the world,the wheat yield saw a significant

escalation from nearly 9% to two out of five between 18.40 and 1960,

before it,on the contrary,declined by roughly5%,

Overall,the overall wheat output in other countries showed an

upward tendency,whereas Asia and Europe experienced an oppositetrend during the whole period,which contributed to much smallergaps among the three in.2000,although Asia still led the way
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the percentage of share of total world production of wheat by Asia Europe and other part of the world from the years 1840 to 2000

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