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The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Ackland , Chirstchurch , London and Edinburgh .

The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Ackland, Chirstchurch, London and Edinburgh. x2K8N

The line graph illustrates temperatures [ in Celsius ] for Auckland, Christchurch, London, and Edinburgh on a monthly year. Overall, the temperatures in Celsius of Auckland and Christchurch is the highest among four cities whereas, London and Edinburgh is the least temperature in Celsius. It is clear from the data, Auckland and Christchurch both recorded warmer temperatures in month of January of approximately 25 Celsius and 24 Celsius respectively. The temperature of Auckland is dropped a low of 15 Celsius in July and Christchurch temperature reaching nearly 10 Celsius in July. At the end of a month both cities temperatures touch to 20 Celsius. In contrast, London and Edinburgh both accounted the coldest temperatures in month of January of 6 Celsius. In July London climbing to a peak of about 23 Celsius and 18 Celsius in Edinburgh during the same month. The temperatures in December of both cities fell down by nearly 6 Celsius.

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