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Great Britain citizens attending cinema

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The given graph delineates the proportion of Great Britain citizens attending cinema from the age of 7 between 1984 and 2003. At first sight, it can be clearly seen that the percentage of Great Britain’s residents between the ages of 7 and 24 took part in theater more than that from the age of above 25 over the showed period. In addition, there was an upward trend in the given four aged groups who enjoyed films outside. In 1984, the percentage of British between the ages of 15 and 24 going to the theatre was approximately 20%, which was the highest level. The figure for this group continued to surge and reach the peak of roughly 70% in 2000 until it witnessed a steady drop to 50% for the rest of the illustrated period. In contrast, a small minority (1%) of middle-aged went to the cinema in 1984. Their percentages also rose significantly over the given period and reached about 15% in 2003. There were some fluctuations in the percentage of children from 7-14 years old going to the cinema before the 1990s. Then this figure rose and peaked at approximately 40% in 1999 and fell from 1999 to 2000. Having a similar trend, the cinema attendance of the 25-35 years old group showed a gradual increase from 5% to 15% before 1994. In the remaining period, this data fluctuated between 20% and 40%.

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