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The line graph below shows population size birth rate and death rate of England base from 700 to 2000

The liner goph depiats Re tnfirmation abaut papulation size in milion, and abo compares He. burth and martality nte of Enghrd and waks In 1700 ard 2000 Overoll, the numha of papuhtion dne Comsidenabay, whereas decaeid birth nale and death ale was to initiale with, the dath and birth srate witnessed number of both Ihese was incneed equally beithoude Brom 30 te 40 and mauhluly rate m 2lta slabihyin hath arey the nest so yoars Subuquent there witesed a quicke decline with bath ales end finally this frefuntionached at 80 by 1950 nomben of deth thamed 37, then oflen there saw a stability but huntR ale at pest of 35a In addihon to Hhis, in 1700, the nomben of gopuletion was reauby 3 millica often thes 50 yars it rerca neal able, eventuelly bapula his size peah boint of 50 milion "end of the

The liner goph depiats Re tnfirmation abaut papulation size in milion, and abo compares He. burth and martality nte of Enghrd and waks In 1700 ard 2000 Overoll, the numha of papuhtion dne Comsidenabay, whereas decaeid birth nale and death ale was to initiale with, the dath and birth srate witnessed number of both Ihese was incneed
equally
 beithoude Brom 30 te 40 and mauhluly
 rate m 2lta slabihyin hath arey the nest This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 yoars Subuquent there witesed a quicke decline with bath ales This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
finally
 this frefuntionached at 80 by 1950 nomben of deth thamed 37, then oflen there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a stability This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 huntR ale at pest of 35a In addihon to Hhis, in 1700, the nomben of gopuletion was reauby 3 millica This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 thes 50 yars it rerca neal able, eventuelly
 bapula his size peah boint of 50 milion "This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
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