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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

The graph displays the number of student graduates from universities in Canada from the year 1992 to 2007. The pink line represents female graduates and the blue line is for male graduates. Overall, female students have always had a higher number than male students since 1992 starting with almost 100, 000 graduates. In the first 3 years, both sexes continue to grow but then started to drop from the year 1995 to 2001. The digits of female graduates were stable for a couple of years from around 1997 to 1999 whereas the male graduates' digits fluctuate. The total of graduates in both males and females then began to gradually extend from the year 2002 onwards. In the year 2007 female graduates remained to have a larger size than the male with approximately 149, 000 students while the male graduates had about 98, 00 students. As we can see, both male and female had the most numbers of graduates in the last year which is 2007.
The graph displays the number of
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graduates
from universities in Canada from the
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year
1992 to 2007. The pink line represents
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female
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graduates
and the blue line is for male graduates.

Overall
,
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female
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students
have always had a higher number than male
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students
since 1992 starting with almost 100, 000
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graduates
. In the
first
3 years, both sexes continue to grow
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then
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started
to drop from the
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year
1995 to 2001. The digits of
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female
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graduates
were stable for a couple of years from around 1997 to 1999 whereas the male graduates' digits fluctuate.

The total of
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graduates
in both
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males
and
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females
then began to
gradually
extend from the
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year
2002 onwards. In the
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year
2007
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female
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graduates
remained to have a larger size than the male with approximately 149, 000
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students
while the male
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graduates
had about 98, 00
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students
. As we can
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, both male and
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female
had the most numbers of
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graduates
in the last
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year
which is 2007.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

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