Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking
1. Latest Topics
2. Speaking Club

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. 67jW

The line graph gives information about, the variation of consumption of three type of fast food among adults in Australia during the period 1975 to 2000. Overall it can be seen that, there was increase in hamburgers and pizza were eaten. However, the fish and chip consumption decreased over the whole period. To begin, In 1975, the number of pizza and hamburgers consumption almost stood at five times a year. Hamburgers consumption increased markedly from 1975 to 1985 and reached just over 80 time per year, then it continued to rise until reached a high of 100 times in 1995, which remained constant for the rest of period. Similar to that, pizza consumption showed a gradual increase between 1975 and 1995 to peaked at 85, and remained steady in last five years. In contrast, fish and chips consumption began at 100 times in 1975, subsequently it showed a slight fluctuation. Therafter, it dropped sharply from 1985 until 2000 to finish at just under 40.

The line graph gives information about, the variation of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
 of three type of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 food among adults in Australia during the period 1975 to 2000. Overall
 it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that, there was increase in hamburgers and pizza were eaten
. However
, the fish and chip You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
 decreased over the whole period.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
, In 1975, the number of pizza and hamburgers You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
 almost stood at five You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
 a year. Hamburgers You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
 increased markedly
 from 1975 to 1985 and reached This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 over 80 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 per year, then it continued to rise until reached a high of 100 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
 in 1995, which remained constant for the rest of period. Similar to that, pizza You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 a gradual increase between 1975 and 1995 to peaked at 85, and remained steady in last five years.

In contrast
, fish and chips You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
 began at 100 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
 in 1975, subsequently
 it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 a slight fluctuation. Possible spelling mistake found.ThereafterThe rafter
Therafter
, it dropped sharply
 from 1985 until 2000 to finish at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 under 40. 