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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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 remained approximately similar.

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 2840. A similar pattern will be also
 observed for the result in Sweden, the percentage of senior citizens inclines from 1940 to 2040 with two gradual dips.

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Japan
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 that it will soar dramatically
 from 2030 onward and reached its peak in 2040. 