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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. eWNB
The Line graph illustrates the information about the percentage of population aged 65 and over Japan, Sweden and America from 1940 to 2040. Overall, in the initial year, the proportion of the population who aged 65 or ábore iN USA and Sweden hareases whereas Japan show decreases. The most striking feature is in middle years, USA and Japan remained approximately similar. It is clear from the given information that, in 1940, there was a higher percentage of older people living in the USA (9%) than Sweden 7%), followed by Japan with only 5% In the USA, there was an increasing trend in the percentile of elderly people from 1940 to 1980 and decreased slightly. However, it is predicted that the figure for this will rise untill 2840. A similar pattern will be also observed for the result in Sweden, the percentage of senior citizens inclines from 1940 to 2040 with two gradual dips. Moving Further to Japan, it is clear that there was slight decline in the proportion of older people from 1940 to 1990 before it showed an upward trend. It is thought that it will soar dramatically from 2030 onward and reached its peak in 2040.
The Line graph illustrates the information about the percentage of population aged 65 and over
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Japan
, Sweden and America from 1940 to 2040.

Overall
, in the initial year, the proportion of the population who aged 65 or
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USA and Sweden
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hareases
whereas
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Japan
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decreases. The most striking feature is in middle years, USA and
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Japan
remained approximately similar.

It is
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information that, in 1940, there was a higher percentage of older
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people
living in the USA (9%) than Sweden 7%
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with
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5% In the USA, there was an increasing trend in the percentile of elderly
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people
from 1940 to 1980 and decreased
slightly
.
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is predicted
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untill
2840. A similar pattern will be
also
observed for the result in Sweden, the percentage of senior citizens inclines from 1940 to 2040 with two gradual dips.

Moving
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to
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Japan
, it is
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that there was slight decline in the proportion of older
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people
from 1940 to 1990
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before
it
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an upward trend. It is
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that it will soar
dramatically
from 2030 onward and reached its peak in 2040.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

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