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The graph below shows the average monthly use of health club in Miami and Florida by all full-time members over last year. The pie charts show the age profile of male and female members.

The graph below shows the average monthly use of health club in Miami and Florida by all full-time members over last year. The pie charts show the age profile of male and female members. 72x3

The bar chart depicts the numbers of people in male and females used a health club as a full-time member per month in Miami, Florida while the pie charts describe the age profile in two sexes. In general, although the numbers of users varied according to the time in the year, more males than females went to a health club. To specify, after a slight decrease from around 560 to the lowest point of about 520 for the first two months of the year, the number of users who were males rose rapidly to a pick of around 850 in June. After that, this number stayed unchanged in the next three months, and finally, fell continuously to approximately 610 by the end of the year. By comparison, the trend for the females was similar to that of the males, except that the increase in the number of users was not so marked as in the males group. For example, this number was stable at 500 in the first two months and went up gradually to around 700 in three months of the summer, before downward fluctuations between 730 and 520 during the final months. Regarding the pie charts, in both sexes, half of the members were in aged between 21 and 45. Strikingly, only at age 65 and over does the number of members who were women was higher than that of men with 32 percent and 25 percent respectively. To sum up, the number of people who went to a health club depended on the seasons of the year with almost users were at aged between 21 and 45.

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