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The line graph below illustrates the proportion of total expenditure in a certain Asian country between 1980 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph below illustrates the proportion of total expenditure in a certain Asian country between 1980 and 2020. M3AYN
The line graph compares the percentage of paying for 5 extraordinary classes in a specific from 1960 to 2000. Overall, the maximum of the coins changed into spent on Food, at the same time as the parent for Fuel/Energy took a very reasonably-priced position. Downward traits were happening in Food, Leisure, Clothing and Fuel/Energy's numbers, at the same time as, transport's parent skilled the first-rate leap. At the start, Food accounted for the very nice percent of general expenditure at almost 33% then it dropped swiftly to below 15% inside the given period. Against this, the number of finances spent on Transport rose barely from below 10% in 1960 to approximately 14% and feature end up the pleasant parent inside the final year. Regarding Leisure, the parent for that declined step by step from almost 19% to 11% for the duration of the given period. Similarly, the amount of paying on Clothing and Fuel/Energy witnessed downward traits from 10% to 5 and 6% to 4% respectively
The line graph compares the percentage of paying for 5 extraordinary classes in a specific from 1960 to 2000.
Overall
, the maximum of the coins
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changed
into spent on Food, at the same time as the
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parent
for Fuel/Energy took a
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very
reasonably
-priced position. Downward traits were happening in Food, Leisure, Clothing and Fuel/Energy's numbers, at the same time as, transport's
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parent
skilled the
first
-rate leap. At the
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start
, Food accounted for the
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very
nice percent of general expenditure at almost 33% then it dropped
swiftly
to below 15% inside the
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given
period. Against this, the number of finances spent on Transport rose
barely
from below 10% in 1960 to approximately 14% and feature
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end
up the pleasant
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parent
inside the final year. Regarding Leisure, the
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parent
for that declined step by step from almost 19% to 11% for the duration of the
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given
period.
Similarly
, the amount of paying on Clothing and Fuel/Energy witnessed downward traits from 10% to 5 and 6% to 4%
respectively
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IELTS academic The line graph below illustrates the proportion of total expenditure in a certain Asian country between 1980 and 2020.

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