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THe British students in England

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The pie charts illustrated the information about the 'British pupils' predilection towards educate in various languages as well as speak in social life including national language [English]. The all languages furcated by the percentages and basis of pattern. The era 2000 to 2010, numerous pupils rely on English language due to the fact this languages used on their social life. French language had a demand in starting era on the contrary this ratio declined, pupils emphasis to learn two different languages to supported them to educate through new methodology and acknowledge of various culture. The French and German languages are difficult to learn, the small portion of the pupils had been learning these languages, when society used these languages in daily social life consequently, 5% of French scholars declined in 2010. The implication of these information, scholars are nominating those languages which helpful for their social life, where they can accessible in a firm and reconcile with society.
The pie charts illustrated the information about the 'British pupils' predilection towards educate in various
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. French
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had a demand in starting era
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this ratio declined, pupils emphasis to learn two
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to supported them to educate through new methodology and acknowledge of various culture.

The French and German
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are difficult to learn, the
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portion of the pupils had been learning these
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languages
, when society
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in daily
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consequently
, 5% of French scholars declined in 2010.

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, scholars are nominating those
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languages
which helpful for their
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life
, where they
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can accessible
in a firm and reconcile with society.

IELTS academic THe British students in England

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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