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The Line graph below gives Information About COVID-19 cases in Hanoi and Ho Chi Minh from February 2021 to July 2021

The Line graph below gives Information About COVID-19 cases in Hanoi and Ho Chi Minh from February 2021 to July 2021 YyGwB

The given line graph depicts information about the number of COVID-19 cases in two cities, namely Hanoi and Ho Chi Minh over the period of 6 months from February 2021 to July 2021. As can be inferred from the graph, the number of COVID-19 cases in Ho Chi Minh remained stable from February to May. But from June onward, COVID-19 cases in Ho Chi Minh city went up and reached a peak in July. Meanwhile, the COVID-19 patients in Hanoi fluctuated prior to its wild rise in July. The period from February to May saw a fluctuation in the percentage of COVID-19 patients in both of these cities. More specifically, there was dropped from 50 to almost 200 patients. But by the end of June, there had been a sharply rose which the onset of the explosion in COVID-19 cases.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 line graph depicts information about the number of COVID-19 cases in two cities, namely
 Hanoi and Ho Chi Minh over the period of 6 months from February 2021 to July 2021.

As can be inferred
 from the graph, the number of COVID-19 cases in Ho Chi Minh remained stable from February to May. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 from June onward, COVID-19 cases in If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Ho Chi Minh City
Ho Chi Minh city
 went up and reached a peak in July. Meanwhile, the COVID-19 patients in Hanoi fluctuated prior to its wild rise in July.

The period from February to May This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a fluctuation in the percentage of COVID-19 patients in both of these cities. More specifically
, there was dropped
 from 50 to almost 200 patients. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of June, there had been a You used an adverb ('sharply') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('rose') instead of another adjective.
sharply rose
 which the onset of the explosion in COVID-19 cases. 