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The line graph and table illustrate water usage by the entire world over decades and consumption of water by two different countries, namely Brazil and Congo in the year 2000.

The line graph and table illustrate water usage by the entire world over decades and consumption of water by two different countries, namely Brazil and Congo in the year 2000. 7rdPk
The line graph and table illustrate water usage by the entire world over decades and consumption of water by two different countries, namely Brazil and Congo in the year 2000. Overall, the water was vastly used by agriculture and there was a considerable amount of water used by industrial and domestic purposes. Moreover, there was an enormous difference in the consumption of water between Brazil and Democratic Republic of Congo in accordance with their population and living area. The graph shows usage of the water never decreased over the sector throughout the decades. Moreover, there were some Industrial and Domestic usage had been subtle until the year 1930. However, in the next couple of decades Industrial water usage was gradually increased and it attained apex point in the year 2000 with little more than 1000. Like the Industrial sector, Domestic sector also recorded its highest point in 2000 with around 200 KM cube. The table clearly shows how two countries used water with respect to population and area. With 176 million population Brazil used 359 metric cube of water. But Congo used only 8 metric cube with a 5. 2 million population. When compared to the percentage of use Congo stands behind Brazil.
The line graph and table illustrate
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between Brazil and Democratic Republic of Congo in accordance with their
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population
and living area. The graph
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of the
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never decreased over the sector throughout the decades.
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, there were
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Industrial
and Domestic
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had been subtle until the year 1930.
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was
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more than 1000. Like the
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recorded its highest point in 2000 with around 200 KM cube.

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how two countries
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Brazil
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359 metric
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Congo stands behind Brazil.
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IELTS academic The line graph and table illustrate water usage by the entire world over decades and consumption of water by two different countries, namely Brazil and Congo in the year 2000.

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