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The line graph shows the trend of citizen of three country, which are Iran, Indonesia and Russia who depart from villages to big cities from year 2000 to 2025.

The line graph shows the trend of citizen of three country, which are Iran, Indonesia and Russia who depart from villages to big cities from year 2000 to 2025. L0EK
The line graph shows the trend of citizen of three country, which are Iran, Indonesia and Russia who depart from villages to big cities from year 2000 to 2025. During this period, the movement of people of the three country is increased, with Iran with the highest result in 2025 with the total number of 95 million people. In Iran, the number rocketed sharply, especially in period from 2015 to 2020, where an increase of 50 million to 80 million people. Similarly, numbers of Russian citizen also shows a significant rise, although as not as sharp as Iran, with the total number of citizen around 88 million in 2025. In contrast, Indonesian numbers grew steadily from 200 up to 2020, followed by stagnation until 2025. A further point of interest is that in 2000, the number of people from all three countries that moved to urban areas were very similar, around 8 to 15 million people, but at 2025, the number grow significantly for Russia and Iran, but not for Indonesia. Overall, the graph highlights a growing number of people moving to cities in Indonesia, Iran and Russia.
The line graph
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the trend of citizen of three country, which are Iran, Indonesia and Russia who depart from villages to
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big
cities from year 2000 to 2025. During this period, the movement of
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of the three country
is increased
, with Iran with the highest result in 2025 with the total
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of 95
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million
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In Iran, the
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rocketed
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,
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million
to 80
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Similarly
,
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of Russian citizen
also
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a significant rise, although as not as sharp as Iran, with the total
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of citizen around 88
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in 2025.
In contrast
, Indonesian
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grew
steadily
from 200 up to 2020, followed by stagnation until 2025. A
further
point of interest is that in 2000, the
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of
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from all three countries that
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moved
to urban areas were
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similar, around 8 to 15
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,
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at 2025, the
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grow
significantly
for Russia and Iran,
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not for Indonesia.

Overall
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moving to cities in Indonesia, Iran and Russia.
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IELTS academic The line graph shows the trend of citizen of three country, which are Iran, Indonesia and Russia who depart from villages to big cities from year 2000 to 2025.

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