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the line graph illustrate the vietnamese students leaning in foreign countries ORD93

As you can see the graph shows you the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015. Between 2000 and 2010 the number of Vietnamese students studied in France and Russia decreased sharply. From 3. 5 million students in France in 2000 to 2. 5 million students in 2010. And dropped from 3 million to 1. 9 million students in Russia. After that, the number of Vietnamese students in both countries raised to 4. 5 million for France and 2. 5 million for Russia. But the number of Vietnamese students in the US has always increased steadily over the years. It raised from 1. 5 million to 5 million in 15 years. The reason for that disparity, I think is because Vietnamese students though that America is the best place for their to live and study and they can make a lot of money after they complete their education.

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