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The line chart shows the recycling rates of three countries.

The line chart shows the recycling rates of three countries. NMnKy
The line chart illustrates the regional household recycling rates in three countries like as United kingdom, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015. The data has calibrated in percentage. Overall, the recycling rates of United kingdom and Germany goes to upward trend. While, the france household convert rates show the downward trend. To begin with, in United kingdom and germany recycling rates. In tear 2005 reprocess rates is slightly increase sti 2009 that was 30%. Moreover, In 2011 to until 2015 in rapidly incline that was 55 percent. In 2005 United kingdom is sharply incline sti 2007 that was 40 %. In next year is remain same to some year in 2009. In the 2009 claim rate is rapidly incline until 2015 that was 60 percent. Furthermore, in france households recycling rate in year 2005 in higher than other countries that was 50 % and then they are sharply declined to 2003 that was 30 percent. In this year it is slowly increase to still 2015 which was 40 %.
The line chart illustrates the regional household
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in three countries like as
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, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015. The data has calibrated in percentage.
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, the
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of
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and Germany goes to upward trend.
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the downward trend. To
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and
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. In tear 2005 reprocess
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is
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2009 that was 30%.
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incline that was 55 percent. In 2005
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2007 that was 40 %. In
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until 2015 that was 60 percent.
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households
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