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The diagrams below show stages in the development of the camera since its invention in 1983.

The diagrams below show stages in the development of the camera since its invention in 1983. nNDyR

The pictures give information about four different models of cameras’ alternations during centuries. In general, cameras in specific time period had been adjusted and developed to a better version in materials and functions. During the 19th century, the first two generation named Daguerrotype (1893) and Kodak No. 1 (1888) were invented in boxy shape. The earliest type was made from wood, it had a static brass lens in the front and the longest length for 36 centimeters while the second one was covered by metal with a half shorter. In the 20th century, two more genres were innovated. Leica 1 which was invented in 1925 had a rectangle form with a smaller shape and its width was a little longer for 14 centimeters. The coverage still unchanged with a bigger lens than Kodak version. In 2000, the latest Digital camera which was the smallest one, was adjusted to plastic coverage and an automatic zoom lens was installed. In order to be more functional, it was included a LCD screen and an Internet connection on one side of the camera.

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