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The Graph shows that The Number of Deaths Due To Terrorism Between the Year of 2011 and 2015. Overall, In Afghanistan in year 2014 there is a highest number of deaths caused due to terrorism and in Iraq highest number of deaths in 2014, Suddenly Since 2014 to 2015 number of deaths are decrease. In year 2011 to 2012 death rate death rate was decrease in all countries except Nigeria. According to grap. After 2012 in iraq death rate increase rapidly till 2014 and then it decrease gredually till 2015. In 2014 there is a highest number of deaths causes due to terrorism in all countries. Afghanistan and Iraq has decrease death since 2014 to 2015. Death rate in afghanistan increase gredually from 2011 to 2015. In afghanistan number of deaths in 2011 is around to 3000 and it increase and at 2015 number of deaths is around to 7000. At the end of 2015 death rate in iran and nigeria are same. it's around 5000. Overall, In Afghanistan in year 2014 there is a highest number of deaths caused due to terrorism and in Iraq highest number of deaths in 2014, Suddenly Since 2014 to 2015 number of deaths are decrease. In year 2011 to 2012 death rate death rate was decrease in all countries except Nigeria. According to grap. After 2012 in iraq death rate increase rapidly till 2014 and then it decrease gredually till 2015. In 2014 there is a highest number of deaths causes due to terrorism in all countries. Afghanistan and Iraq has decrease death since 2014 to 2015. Death rate in afghanistan increase gredually from 2011 to 2015. In afghanistan number of deaths in 2011 is around to 3000 and it increase and at 2015 number of deaths is around to 7000. At the end of 2015 death rate in iran and nigeria are same. it's around 5000.
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