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The line chart shows the quantities of different types goods imported in Russia from 1975 to 1981

The line chart shows the quantities of different types goods imported in Russia from 1975 to 1981 7W2X5

The assigned line grap illustrate, there are four various types of good imported in Russia between 1975 and 1981 It can be seen in chart, import of dairy products are least only 2 million of tones in 1975. whereas, consumer durables are raised with 6 million of tones in same years. Then, dairy goods significantly went up 4 to 13 tones in respective year from 1976 to 1978. In addition, which is slowly grow up and peaked at 17 tone till five years. In contrast, initially as consumer durables which is gradually increased and suddenly boomed down 7 tones when it is reached at 1981. Moreover, when it is come to other commodities. 10 million tones import both goods such as pharmaceutical and textile in 1975 which represents similar trend. After that, textile shows downward in between 1976 and 1979 correspondingly, which is accounted for 15 to 2 tones of goods. However, from 1976 to 1979, it was gradually raised and reached at 18. Between 1979 and 1981, both products imported constantly by Russia Overall, the import of dairy goods and pharmaceutical showed an upward trend year after year while textile reduced steeply.

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