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Consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections

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The given graph illustrates the amount of six different power sources consumed by The US over the 50 years. Overall, the consumption of petrol and oil, coal see an enormous increase, there is a slight growth in that of natural gas, nuclear and solar or wind over the period shown. The amount of Hydropower is consumed almost at a stable level over the whole period. The period from 1980 to 2020 saw small vatuation in consuming nuclear, solar or wind and hydropower power, about 5 units, 4 units and 3 units respectively. In contrast, there was a significant climb in the amount of coal and petrol and oil energy consumption in the same period, from around 15and 35 units to 25 and 45 units accordingly. Natural gas consumption account for 25 units in 2020. Nuclear, solar or wind and hydropower are predicted to remain unchanged over the last 10 years. The estimating for petrol and oil consumption will continuously rise to 50 units in 2030, this is 25 units higher than that of coal. The figure for natural gas will be expected to stay steady during the same period.
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power sources consumed by The US
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the 50 years.

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, the
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consumption
of petrol and oil, coal
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an enormous increase, there is a slight growth in that of natural gas, nuclear and solar or wind
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over
the
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shown. The amount of Hydropower
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almost at a stable level
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over
the whole period.

The
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from 1980 to 2020
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small
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in consuming nuclear, solar or wind and hydropower power, about 5
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, 4
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and 3
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respectively
.
In contrast
, there was a significant climb in the amount of coal and petrol and oil energy
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consumption
in the same
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period
, from around 15and 35
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units
to 25 and 45
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units
accordingly
. Natural gas
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consumption
account for 25
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in 2020.

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are predicted
to remain unchanged
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the last 10 years. The estimating for petrol and oil
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in 2030, this is 25
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higher than that of coal. The figure for natural gas will be
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IELTS academic Consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections

Academic
  American English
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6.5
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