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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line chart represents the number of internet users in different countries from 1990 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The line graph illustrates the number of internet users for six countries over a ten-year period. Overall, in the beginning, all these six countries were witnessed that all were having the same number of internet users for few years. But at the end of the period, United Kingdom, Nigeria and Egypt were risen at the top for having maximum internet users, whereas, Sweden was also increased. Even South Africa and Kenya also increased gradually and their count was near about the same. At the beginning of 1990, there were zero internet users in all the countries till 1994. But suddenly after 1996, internet users started rising tediously in Sweden and South Africa. After 2002, Kenya started increasing slightly and in 2009 Sweden reached near about 10M whereas, South Africa and Kenya reached almost half of the 10M customers. In contrast, United Kingdom from 2009, reached at an upward trend, which was recorded more than 50M internet customers. However, Nigeria was skyrocketed to more than 40M active users in 2009. Egypt demonstrated a tediously climbing pattern of nearly about 20M internet users in 2009.
The line graph illustrates the number of internet
users
for six countries over a ten-year period.

Overall
, in the beginning, all these six countries
were witnessed
that all were having the same number of internet
users
for few years.
But
at the
end
of the period, United Kingdom, Nigeria and Egypt
were risen
at the top for having maximum internet
users
, whereas, Sweden was
also
increased. Even South Africa and Kenya
also
increased
gradually
and their count was near about the same.

At the beginning of 1990, there were zero internet
users
in all the countries till 1994.
But
suddenly
after 1996, internet
users
started
rising
tediously
in Sweden and South Africa. After 2002, Kenya
started
increasing
slightly
and in 2009 Sweden reached near about 10M whereas, South Africa and Kenya reached almost half of the 10M customers.

In contrast
, United Kingdom from 2009, reached at an upward trend, which
was recorded
more than 50M internet customers.
However
, Nigeria
was skyrocketed
to more than 40M active
users
in 2009. Egypt demonstrated a
tediously
climbing pattern of
nearly
about 20M internet
users
in 2009.
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IELTS academic The line chart represents the number of internet users in different countries from 1990 to 2009.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
183 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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