Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The line chart illustrates the revenue from the sales of 3 types of books in a country over 4 years till 2006.

Overall, it can be seen that the sales figures for adult fiction books showed a downward trend by reaching the lowest point from the top. In contrast, children’s books maintained its increasing trend till the end of the span and peaked. In 2002, the sales of adult fiction books stood at $45 million compared to that of children’s books at around $32 million. In the next year, the two books reversed their positions and the sales of children’s books continued to rise gradually until it reached a peak of $56 million in 2005. During this time adult fiction books once showed positive sales figures in 2004, but fell to the lowest point of $30 million at the end of the span. The sales of educational books made up $25 million in 2002 and then rose sharply in the next year. Although the trend was downward till 2005, the sales figures recovered again and overtook the adult fiction by $2 million in the final year in question.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 figures for adult You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdramanovelmythimaginationfableyarn
fiction
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 a downward trend by reaching the lowest point from the top. In contrast
, children’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
 maintained its increasing trend till the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the span and peaked.

In 2002, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 of adult You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdramanovelmythimaginationfableyarn
fiction
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
 stood at $45 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 compared to that of children’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
 at around $32 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
 the next
 year, the two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
 reversed their positions and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 of children’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
 continued to rise gradually
 until it reached a peak of $56 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 in 2005. During this time adult You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdramanovelmythimaginationfableyarn
fiction
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
 once This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 figures in 2004, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 fell to the lowest point of $30 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the span.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 of educational You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
 made up $25 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 in 2002 and then rose sharply
 in the next
 year. Although the trend was downward till 2005, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 figures recovered again and overtook the adult You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdramanovelmythimaginationfableyarn
fiction
 by $2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 in the final year in question. 