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The charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012

The pie chats illustrates the share of sales of diffrent books by a bookseller in 1972, 1992 and 2012. Overall, the maximum sales ere recoded for adult fiction books. Also fiction books sales increased, while the popularity of all the remaining books either deceased or fluctuated. Looking at graph in more detail, in 1972 the sales of both adult fiction books and children's fiction books was 20% each. Both their sales increased with the time and in 2012 adult fiction sales contributed about 45% of total sales, whereas children's fiction accounted for 25% of the toatal book sales. On the other hand, share of sales of other books and biographies fell over time. A quarter of the books sold were other books in 1972 and their share decreased to 12% by 2012. The figure for biographies deceased from 20% in 1972 to mere 8% in 2012. Finally, the sales of travel books fluctuated over time. Their sales acconted for 15% of the total sales in 1972, 18% in 1993 and only 10% in 2012
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diffrent
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by a bookseller in 1972, 1992 and 2012.
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, the maximum
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ere
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recoded
for adult
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fiction
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.
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Also
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books
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increased, while the popularity of all the remaining
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either deceased or fluctuated.

Looking at graph in more detail, in 1972 the
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sales
of both adult
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fiction
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books
and children's
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fiction
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was 20% each. Both their
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sales
increased with the time and in 2012 adult
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contributed about 45% of total
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, whereas children's
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accounted for 25% of the
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toatal
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.
On the other hand
, share of
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of other
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and biographies fell over time. A quarter of the
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sold were other
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in 1972 and their share decreased to 12% by 2012. The figure for biographies deceased from 20% in 1972 to mere 8% in 2012.
Finally
, the
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of travel
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fluctuated over time. Their
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acconted
for 15% of the total
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in 1972, 18% in 1993 and
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10% in 2012
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IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012

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