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The line chart illustrates the rate of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050. Overall, children in the 0-14 age group tend to increase, while people in the 25-37, 38-45 and over 65 decline slowly.

The line chart illustrates the rate of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050. Overall, children in the 0-14 age group tend to increase, while people in the 25-37, 38-45 and over 65 decline slowly. Bw3ad
The line chart illustrates the rate of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050. Overall, children in the 0-14 age group tend to increase, while people in the 25-37, 38-45 and over 65 decline slowly. The percentage of people aged 65 or more was 60% in 1950. Then its grew to 70% by 1990. It is expected that decrease slowly to 55% in 2050. In 1950 the rate of people between 38 and 45 years old was 25% but this increased approximately to 50% in 1990. It is predicted that the population will go down 40% by 2050. 25 to 37 year-old people were similar to two age group before. The population was about 20% in 1950 and decreased to 10% 40 years later. Again its expected that fall to 0% in 2050. In constrat, childrenin the 0-14 age group maintain 5% from 1950 to 1990 and it is enticipated that will go up to 20% in 2050.
The line chart illustrates the rate of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050.
Overall
, children in the 0-14 age group tend to increase, while
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in the 25-37, 38-45 and over 65 decline
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The percentage of
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aged 65 or more was 60% in 1950. Then its grew to 70% by 1990. It is
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that decrease
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this increased approximately to 50% in 1990. It
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